ACADEMIC SHOWCASE
Three important moments
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UCI LIBRARY
An important part of my research process was the UCI Library, where I was able to find a wide array of credible and reliable sources. I found 2 of my Big 3 sources from the UCI Library database. While searching for chicken cognition, I came across a Literature Review by Lori Marino, and I found some citations or references at the end of Literature Review helpful.
BIG THREE ANNOTATIONS
The Big Three Annotations was another important moment in my research process. These annotations created a foundation for my Literature Review, specifically explaining the methodology. These annotations helped me understand and analyze the source, and I found the annotation strategy really useful.
Social Media Campaign Outline
The social media campaign outline or day-by-day template helped me outline all the problems, solutions, and organizations included in my AP. For the social media campaign I created an infographic that presented the major issues relating to factory farming, which I also included in my AP essay.
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best peer review advice I gave
Throughout Jason's essay, I felt that many the transitions between each section was abrupt and rushed. Therefore, I recommended adding another paragraph which would not only serve as a transition to the next section, but also conclude the problem section and emphasize the significant or "So What"?
I found that Jason's Definition of the Problem was great, however the only thing it lacked was historical context on wolf hunting and their mistreatment. A short history section can make the problem section more interesting and can help the audience understand how the problem or issue started in the first place.
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best Peer review advice I received
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This is one of the best revisions I received because it made me more aware that my Problem section lacked historical context. In my revisions page I show a new paragraph where I discussed the history behind factory farming. Adding historical content is significant because factory farming is a fairly new industrialized system, and is important that the audience know the origins of this system.
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This comment is one of the best peer review advice I received because it made me more aware that I needed to work on making more smooth transitions. I also received comments from Professor McClure that I needed to vary my introductions, so this advice solidified that I need to work on creating smoother transitions.